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‘I’m home,’ you call up the stairs of 221B Baker Street.

You lugged the shopping bags with you until you finally reached the flat that you shared with your best friend John and his roommate, Sherlock. You’d been living with them for about 2 months now and you were never bored with the antics that were going on.

‘Thank god you’re back (y/n), I need to go out. Anywhere but here, just make sure he doesn’t blow the place up or something,’ John sighed as he indicated to Sherlock who was lying on the sofa curled up and facing the back of it. John threw his coat on, kissed your cheek and ran out the door before you could even speak.

You sighed and began to move into the kitchen with your shopping. For once there were no experiments or body parts in the kitchen. When you emerged minutes later, Sherlock was still sulking on the sofa.

‘What was that all about?’ you asked quietly, sitting down in Sherlock’s chair. He shifted slightly at the sound of your voice.

‘I don’t know what you’re talking about,’ he mumbled.

‘What did you do to make John want to leave so suddenly?’ you pressed. Sherlock turned so that he was staring up at the ceiling.

‘I may have insulted his intelligence,’ he mumbled. You stopped yourself from laughing.

‘Nothing new then,’ you say picking up today’s newspaper.

‘What do you mean?’ he asks. You peer at Sherlock over your paper and see that he has now sat up and is staring intensely at you and you frown.

‘Sherlock you insult everyone’s intelligence, I’m certain that you don’t even know you’re doing it a lot of the time,’ you say with a little smile and turn back to the paper.

‘Have I ever insulted you?’ he asks in a way that is so genuine it’s completely out of character.

‘Numerous times Sherlock, I got over it,’ you told him, watching him suspiciously.

‘I’m sorry,’ he mumbled. You almost fell out of the chair.

‘Excuse me?’ you asked.

Sherlock looked down at the floor for a moment and then back up at you.

‘I never meant to upset you,’ he said.

‘Am I really hearing this? The great Sherlock Holmes is apologising?’ you asked, completely unbelieving of what you were hearing.

Sherlock huffed and lay back on the sofa, eyes closed but facing the ceiling.

You watched him for a moment and smiled, he was genuinely concerned that he had upset you. You stood up and quietly stepped over to Sherlock, leaning down and gently kissing his cheek.

Sherlock’s eyes shot open and before you could pull away he had grabbed you and leaned up to press his lips against yours gently. He pulled away as quickly as he had kissed you, but instead of releasing you he pulled you against him.

You rested your head on his chest and his arm wrapped around your waist. You pulled your legs up and curled into Sherlock.

‘I might need to point out things you’ve done wrong more often,’ you teased with a smile.
He chuckled and you felt the vibrations through his chest.

The two of you lay there in comfortable silence with his hand tracing up and down your side and you drawing shapes on his chest.
it's short i know, but i really wanted to write sherlock so this is my first attempt, i hope he's in character and i apologise if not. please let me know what you think.

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Thornpelt125 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
John: *finally comes back* WHA??? *looks hurt* B-but I THOUGHT U LOVED ME Sad 
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DiamondandtheMaster Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Most adorable thing eva  OMG MOAR POEMS!  :squee: Judge   . plz make another! :D
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AaliyahJaynee Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014
CUTE.
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nightfury150 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014
:)
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thnksfrtheanxiety Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
SO CUTE. OMG I CANT
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MikuCat555 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
awwwwee
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oberon13 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
A wonderful piece of writing. It was a simple yet complex piece, something that makes a book wonderful. Beautiful
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missdarlingdead Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Student Writer
thank you :D
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oberon13 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your very welcome!
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Whovian13423 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Student Writer
It was so cute
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missdarlingdead Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Student Writer
thank you :)
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KAWAII!~
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missdarlingdead Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Student Writer
:D
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Meew3 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
Dawww
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missdarlingdead Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Student Writer
:D
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I wuv it Frozen - HUG! :happybounce: +fav 
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missdarlingdead Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Student Writer
thankyou :)
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KingofHearts709 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Student Writer
LOVE THIS SO MUUUCCCHHHH
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missdarlingdead Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Student Writer
awh, thankyou so much!!
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Star-Trekker-13 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
I love it!!! :iconletmehugyouplz:
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missdarlingdead Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Student Writer
thankyou!! :D
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kiralogan123 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Student Artist
ffffffffffffffffnnnnnnuuuuahhhhhhhhhhhhhhahah
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missdarlingdead Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Student Writer
:D
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FateZerofangirl Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Student Artist
Cute...!!Fluffy Sherlock!!! <3
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missdarlingdead Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Student Writer
i'm glad you like fluffy sherlock <3
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Floridadaawesome Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014
you sneaky bastard 
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missdarlingdead Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Student Writer
:D
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Floridadaawesome Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014
^.^ 
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ImperatrixTempore Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
<3
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missdarlingdead Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Student Writer
<3
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Mauling-Savage-Sith Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH SO FREAKIN' CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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missdarlingdead Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Student Writer
THANK YOU LOTS AND LOTS :D
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Always-The-Dreamer Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014
I don't often appreciate fluff, but... Awww! The Fluffiness!!!
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missdarlingdead Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Student Writer
i'm glad you like it :D
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Always-The-Dreamer Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014
I do. Well done!
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Inugirl115 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014
awww the fluff
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missdarlingdead Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Student Writer
:D
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holster262 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Student
This is so adorable :D
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missdarlingdead Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Student Writer
thank you :)
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holster262 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Student
Np :)
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NalaMarieTotallyRock Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Now if we add Kili Loki and Jack Frost to Sherlock cuddling id die gladly die cuddling with Sherlock Loki Kili and Jack *fangirl scream*
No but really this is a really cute story :)
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missdarlingdead Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Student Writer
thankyou:)
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NalaMarieTotallyRock Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
no problem :D
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awesomesauce8453 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014
OH MY GOD YES!!!!
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NalaMarieTotallyRock Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hahah cuddling with all the cuties ;)
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bethtojatjar Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Meh want Chu cuddle up with meh Boi! *cuddles with Sherly*
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missdarlingdead Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Student Writer
:D
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ichigosakura17 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014
Well isn't that adorable.
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missdarlingdead Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Student Writer
thankyou:)
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ichigosakura17 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014
No problems
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